So it's over all! would love to hear your opinion, even if it's only two or three words!
Too cheesy? Hope not, think these two needed a nice happy ending with no messing, they've had enough of that!
New story will be started hopefully by weekend. I am away Friday/Sat so if it's not up by Thurs eve it May be Sunday!
Thanks SO much for all the reads, comments I have enjoyed this SO much!
ahhhh that was really really good
ReplyDeletewrite ur next story soon plz
i love all of them
Ooops! Sorry I posted my comment on the actual last chapter. :) So go back and take a gander
ReplyDeleteJBieber Lover
I loved it. Will there be an epilogue?
ReplyDeleteThank goodness for happy endings!
<3
Lovely
OMG! I love it! It is not cheesy it's just right. Would like to see what happens to them after a while but that might be another story. lol
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work.
Lively
I absolutely loved this story I thought it was wonderful and definitely not to cheesy I can't wait for your next story to start and I'm so happy you are on here and not buzzle anymore I make it so much easier to read and not have to go through tons of other stories to find yours i love it and cant wait till your next story
ReplyDelete~M
(that's what I signed as on buzzle)
Cheesy, but in the best way possible!!! Another great story!
ReplyDelete-mg
Kooky! Thanks so much. Loved writing this! new story starts today:)
ReplyDeleteJBL - Thanks for them both! Comments make me happy:)
Lovely - :), sorry won't be an epilogue... somethings are best left unsaid!
Lively - I know, but there are more stories to bring out, so it's on with the next story.
Sorry to hear that things are still tying you up at the hospital. Hope your brother gets well soon, xx
M- I know that is SO why I moved here. I do lose the random drop in's that I got from Biuzzle, but I don't miss the pomp, the censorship and the rest! So glad you found me again! Hopet hte next one is as interesting for you!
mg Gotta love a bit of cheese!:) Thanks for comments!
So look forward to your views on next story!!
MZ
Thanks you Maro..I think my son knows that his mamma needs time, It's just that i can't take my eyes off my baby..I am planning to become a full time photographer once he's older..And the way you pictured Majorca, I am going to visit that place..I finished reading Ellen's story today, loved Arnold & Champagne.. :) :) You are among one of my favourite authors now.. :D :D
ReplyDeleteThank YOU Shweta! Boys and their mamma's hey?? I've got two boys and they've been both hard work and really rewarding! Majorca is half over touristed and half completely untouched. Definitely worth a visit!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked the story, and hope you enjoy the next one too!!
MZ
Lovely story. Couldn't help noticing, you mentioned 2 boys. How old are they. Amazed you could make time to write so regularly with 2 kids?
ReplyDeleteI am glad I rediscovered you. Buzzle wasn't the same without you. :-)
Cheers,
Pia
Hi Pia and welcome to my blog!! :)
ReplyDeleteYes I have two sons, 7 and 4, I started writing proper whilst I was off work with the youngest and the older one was in school. I only work part time, so that gives me time manage!
I'm quite lucky in that I manage to write most of my stuff straight off, I don't do tons of editing unless I'm struggling on a story line. Once I'm on a roll I tend to have to stop because it's flowing and I haven't eaten or slept!
I write at night when everyone's in bed, bathed fed and out of my hair...and that usually includes their father too!! For me it's a release over TV, movies etc, and where there's a will there's a way!:)
That's why I love so many comments, makes the arguments and the messy house worthwhile!!!
What about you? Loving getting to know my readers in more depth on here!!
MZ
Hey Maro,
ReplyDeleteWas re-reading this story just for a lark :)
I am in the same boat as you, work part time, 2 kids a boy 8 and a girl of 5.
Am following all your stories though I don't comment as much. Thanks for your stories, they make my day :)
Cheers,
Pia